tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23063364.post1054125381936928215..comments2023-06-22T11:03:17.127-04:00Comments on The Write Experience: THE STALKER 2 (Dickens Challenge)NL Gasserthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11601313602009358600noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23063364.post-21551133348560657402007-12-25T15:28:00.000-05:002007-12-25T15:28:00.000-05:00Nadja -- Your last comment, in brackets, nailed my...Nadja -- Your last comment, in brackets, nailed my only problem with this chapter -- it's waaayyyy too short. You had me interested, engaged, reading along at a great clip, which isn't easy when there's a bunch of exposition -- and then it ended. <BR/><BR/>But you're doing everything right from my perspective. You've got a sensational opening paragraph, wonderful dialog, and a deft, economicalTimothy Hallinanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00551263887774445511noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23063364.post-88592608512186121752007-12-24T15:30:00.000-05:002007-12-24T15:30:00.000-05:00In this short chapter, you've given us so much -- ...In this short chapter, you've given us so much -- again. We know more about the business, we've got a name for the guy who got Mason kicked out of the military (I absolutely love "The Smile") and now we have another nemesis in Buchanan. I can't wait for the next installment.Lisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00665632105920753931noreply@blogger.com